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Title helpppppppp!
I've been working on this LO of our first dance for FOREVER. 2 weeks now almost. I'm STUUUUUUUCK on the title. I was trying to use the song title, but "Come" or "Away" with the rest of the title around it smaller just seems weird.
Can anyone help? The song was "Come Away with Me" by Norah Jones. Lyrics are below. It's a single B&W photo of us dancing. Come away with me in the night Come away with me And I will write you a song Come away with me on a bus Come away where they can't tempt us With their lies And I want to walk with you On a cloudy day In fields where the yellow grass grows knee-high So won't you try to come? Come away with me and we'll kiss On a mountaintop Come away with me And I'll never stop loving you And I want to wake up with the rain Falling on a tin roof While I'm safe there in your arms So all I ask is for you To come away with me in the night Come away with me ETA: Here's the LO so far: Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu!
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~Colleen~
Re-attempting a creative life after far too long! Last edited by ColleenSwerb; 11-17-2009 at 09:05 AM. |
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Can we see the layout in progress? I'm a very visual person... maybe seeing the photo & layout will help?
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What about the line "I want to walk with you" either in whole or in part.
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How about you use the song title, just with a tiny alpha? Or have "With me" bigger and come away smaller?
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Yea, I went to bed right after I posted this, and I realized I should've posted the LO as I have it so far. My bad! Edited to add it now
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I say.. Write Come Away big.. and then whatever line you want to use smaller across it or under it.. (with me..or whatever)..
https://www.sweetshoppecommunity.com...24/cookie6.jpg <- like this or https://www.sweetshoppecommunity.com.../grateful4.jpg <- this
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Oh I hadn't even THOUGHT of doing it like that with an acrylic or a stamp and then a font. I love that La!!!
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~Colleen~
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i would put the entire song where the journaling is, but omit the last line. where the title is - that is where i would put the last line of the song, overlapping the alpha over the song itself.
like la - i would use a stamp or a scripty alpha. i would then use a tag hanging off the string to say that this was our first dance.
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Do you want to write your own journaling on the place for it, or want to write the lyrics there? If you want to have your journaling there, I would put the lyrics faded into the background on the left side (it creates a sort of T with the journaling then) and choose one of the lyrics line as a title. Either the title of the song or perhaps "Safe in your arms" if it doesn't seem too sweet.
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~Colleen~
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Colleen, I love that song. And we actually used it for our last song when we got married... (5 years ago!)
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